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Josh
is 9% done
The author has a d h d and you can't convince me otherwise.
The way he whiplashes from topic to topic and it's all done in exposition style.
To say it's amateur is a huge understatement. The pacing is laughably bad where in the space of two sentences, there'll be a dozen trips to the past in a time machine.But then he'll spend a few paragraphs describing another trip.Just to go see a movie.But it's not even clear
— Nov 05, 2025 02:29PM
The way he whiplashes from topic to topic and it's all done in exposition style.
To say it's amateur is a huge understatement. The pacing is laughably bad where in the space of two sentences, there'll be a dozen trips to the past in a time machine.But then he'll spend a few paragraphs describing another trip.Just to go see a movie.But it's not even clear
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Josh
is 7% done
Ehhh. Is this a self published book? It's written like it has very little direction from an experienced author or publisher...
Hope i'm giving it a shot.But there's definitely some issues with the characters and all this mandering thoughts... it's written like a stream of conscious story.
— Nov 05, 2025 02:12PM
Hope i'm giving it a shot.But there's definitely some issues with the characters and all this mandering thoughts... it's written like a stream of conscious story.
