Status Updates From Uncaged (The Uncaged #1)

Long time Alpha Knotting. Dedicated barbarian alpha.

Long time alpha knotting. Dedicated alpha.

ho-hum so far, the story is a little slow. Hopefully, it picks up.

This is slightly reminiscent of X-Men, which is what I've been wanting to find in an Omegaverse book for awhile.

Chains that once bound us were now used to trap and imprison our enemies. In extreme cases, they were even used to kill. This was our way. Wherever we went, wherever we did not belong, they called us the uncaged.

I want to beta read this book. There is potential for greatness, but it needs a to go through a critique

"I'd seen plenty of human women up close and personal, but something about this one was truly different."

human women>? This is not alien pnr. As far as I know there are not different species of women in this world. Just write 'I'd seen plenty of women up close and personal,' and leave it at that

Surprisingly good so far. I want to give the author constructive criticism regarding the dialogue. It could be more concise, tweaked to be more natural sounding.

The post apoc setting is cool. It's set in a futuristic USA. Many parts are apparently unlivable or something. There's emphasis put on the importance of breeders, which reminds me slightly of The Handmaiden's Tale