Status Updates From Her Vampire Assassin (Midni...

The "sexy" scene seemed forced and out of context. I'll be skipping any more of them. And what about the kidnapped woman? The mains are rolling around in bed at this "club", is the hostage just a plot device that we're supposed to forget about? Sloppy writing mistake.

To this point, there's been minimal chemistry between the mains. Now, they're in his room and he's ordering her to get naked and she just does. The woman still held captive by the animals he hunts? Forgotten. Any kind of indication that this is a mutual consent activity? Nope. Any kind of build up to this point? Negative.

"Her promised land hovers over my cock"...I could have lived my entire life without reading that sentence.

They've just found a woman who has been tortured by these creatures they're hunting and one of the creatures escapes with the woman. Instead of being concerned or discussing it, they're bickering about a companion and heading back to this club that apparently all the related stories centre around. BIG plot hole and a pretty big jackhole move.

I don't think that I've read this author before. So far, the mains aren't really showing any chemistry or real personality. The h is really immature for 30 years old and the H is...nothing really. Blonde and old and basically that's it.