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Susie
is 48% done
Ok the storyline is really interesting. The time line events is still all over.
Like in one paragraph he’s talking to his mom, and then it’s a week later. I mean… in paragraph?
— Aug 11, 2025 01:49PM
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Like in one paragraph he’s talking to his mom, and then it’s a week later. I mean… in paragraph?
Susie
is 20% done
How can eyes glitter like black beetle wings ?
— Aug 10, 2025 10:33PM
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Susie
is 17% done
So far I’m not reading of any fae. The MMC are human Faun.
— Aug 10, 2025 10:17PM
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Susie
is 17% done
It’s strange how the writer will have huge jumps in time, from one paragraph to another.
For example talking to his mother, then the the paragraph is “a week later”. No brake or separation or smooth transition.
17% honestly this weirdly placed time jumps are making it hard to continue
— Aug 10, 2025 10:10PM
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For example talking to his mother, then the the paragraph is “a week later”. No brake or separation or smooth transition.
17% honestly this weirdly placed time jumps are making it hard to continue
Susie
is 15% done
I’m at 15% I like the characters and the storyline seems ok for now.
The pacing and timeline is strange though. This makes it frustrating and hard to keep reading. Adairs pet name for National is cringy too, in my opinion.
— Aug 10, 2025 09:59PM
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The pacing and timeline is strange though. This makes it frustrating and hard to keep reading. Adairs pet name for National is cringy too, in my opinion.










