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Hmmmm the h annoys me

I’m not sure I want to continue reading this. For one the grammar in this book irks me! Second, the names of the characters are kinda silly. Third, the dialogue within the characters is not the best. I’m still left confused. I also noted that at times the dialogue can be too “wordy”which I feel is not necessary. Fourth, the heroine is to submissive and docile.

I’ve noticed several grammatical errors.

Hmm... I need the H to show some glimmers of softening real soon