Status Updates From You’re all I Have

TFW the author is so visibly american by their misspelling (and variant spelling) alone, but also by some concepts… but the plot progresses well enough.

gets better, even where it follows along canon it does that better now

guess the author just didn’t want to beat butterfly wings… or was just lazy/disinterested in the beginning

The first at-all-significant canon-retelling deviation in chapter 9, wow. I do wonder whether the canon-closeness is that, with his passenger, he’s really all that more Gryffindor than he was in canon, most of what Snape always accused him to be, more daredevil, fuck the consequences, like…

ok but stays too close to canon, for now