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Also, if they are college freshmen (likely 18), they would not be old enough to drink in America. These are little things but I think they are important to overall quality.

Kind of a pet peeve of mine but if a non-American author decides to have American characters, it’s important to make the American characters sound American (I’m sure the same thing can be said for other nationalities but I am only able to give critiques on American lingo). For me personally, it takes away from the overall quality of the book.

Read maybe 3 chapters in, just don’t like the writing style, feels lazy and the characters kind of do too 🤷‍♀️ also all the characters so far are kind of obnoxious