Status Updates From Drowning in Beauty: The Neo...

Dan's story was surprisingly good until I read Quentin's which was brilliant, Borgesian, until the end. It was based on an unbelievable mythology not finally made believable. Still very good and probably the best though I've yet to read the last story.

Yarrow Paisley's Arnold of Our Time is more like the thing. Yarrow juggles his balls, linguistically and allegorically, before letting them lightly drop at the end of his performance. I thought only bad writers like Mike didn't know you never have two 'ou's consecutively when an adjective is made from a noun like 'humour' but there it was in misspelt 'glamorous' and Ursula Pflug's a good writer. I blame the editor