Status Updates From Wings of Silk

Wings of Silk
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Li-Ying Lundquist

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Kathy S is 60% done

— May 30, 2022 08:28PM Add a comment

Bee is 51% done

The writing feels very childish or inexperienced and I can't tell if it is done on purpose or not. If it is on purpose, I think it distracts wildly from the content. Sentences like 'my heart screams in excitement!' fill the entire novel and it seems very adolescent... The beginning of the book is from a 5-year-old's POV which I found odd.. but the writing made sense. But now the character is 22 acting the same??

— Oct 28, 2021 06:23AM 1 comment

ana is finished

— Oct 27, 2021 05:32PM Add a comment

ana is 81% done

— Oct 26, 2021 12:43PM Add a comment

ana is 67% done

— Oct 26, 2021 03:03AM Add a comment

ana is 38% done

— Oct 25, 2021 03:11AM Add a comment

Bee is 16% done

The writing feels cringey… and the perspective being from a small child is strange!! Lots of good potential with the governmental discourse. I have a feeling this book is going to feel like it would be better written in another style.

— Oct 23, 2021 05:59PM Add a comment

Monika is 88% done

— Oct 19, 2021 03:53AM Add a comment

Monika is 28% done

— Oct 17, 2021 02:50PM Add a comment

ana is 6% done

— Oct 15, 2021 03:06PM Add a comment