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The story has merit. The characters are studied and well rounded, if caricatural for some of them. But the reading becomes tedious when each one's thoughts, feelings and reactions are repeated ad nauseam. Situations are explained over and over again, and yet again several chapters later.

However, I have enjoyed the story.

This is just too wordy for me.
I suspect there is a good story buried here somewhere, but for now I'm outta here!