Yas’s Reviews > Total Want of Propriety, Volume 1: Darcy's Reformation : A Pride & Prejudice Variation > Status Update

The story has merit. The characters are studied and well rounded, if caricatural for some of them. But the reading becomes tedious when each one's thoughts, feelings and reactions are repeated ad nauseam. Situations are explained over and over again, and yet again several chapters later.

However, I have enjoyed the story.