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Matthew
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Dialogue and writing is incredibly stiff. Just not written well and doesn’t flow very well, especially in dialogue as mentioned
— Mar 04, 2026 04:12PM
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JasperKazai
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I decided to just power through and skim the rest, because of how disinterested I am. Turns out it ends here, at 37% of the overall collection.
Boring as fuck. Not nearly enough of a hook for a compelling story. The actions Jak takes are stupid. The sex is boring. The relationships are too easy. What a dud of a book. I do not plan to ever continue this series. Maybe if I get truly bored, or forget how I hated this.
— Aug 17, 2023 01:53PM
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Boring as fuck. Not nearly enough of a hook for a compelling story. The actions Jak takes are stupid. The sex is boring. The relationships are too easy. What a dud of a book. I do not plan to ever continue this series. Maybe if I get truly bored, or forget how I hated this.














