Status Updates From The Point of No Return

ew dirty mouth, ok, dirty word, ok, but dirty hole is SUCH a turnoff holy shit

I'm sorry the main villain dies in a single paragraph? no fight, nothing? lame

typo should be "too" not "to"

why is "God" capitalized this time but not others?

ok os how are we gonna close the book in about 50 pages like this?

typo should be "part" not "party"

No, you most definitely should have sent them away. It was just a coincidence that Callum took you then. But no, don't let this scary situation badger you into believing that you were in the wrong. Omfg please author don't do this

typo missing word

are you serious?

good for her, tbh. that whole thing was pathetic of them

I'm sorry, no, she's too forgiving about the fact that ERIK HELD A KNIFE AGAINST HER THROAT AS A SELF-DEFENSE LESSON RIGHT AFTER ALL OF THAT? That's ridiculous. If she almost died, like they said, then how tf is that supposed to make her feel right afterward? Nah, she needs to kick them out

there should be an "in" here or else this sentence just reads weirdly

1. Typo should be "her" not "here"
2. "She was shaken and shaking." This sentence is redundant

Formatting error

Typo should be “car” not “cat”
This is bad y’all

“My voice was plenty warm. It always was right now, with all the rehearsals and my regular, screaming orgasms.”
….if anything that would ruin her voice

If this is in reference to Batman’s cave, “bat cave” should be capitalized

I think there’s a mistake here. If they’re doing anal, how would his back be pressed against hers? That doesn’t make any sense.
Also, is there gonna be any MM stuff, or is it just gonna feel like a gangbang lmao?

Typo “drawn out” should be hyphenated bc it comes before the noun

I do appreciate how kinky this book is

Typo should be “it” not “I”

Do wish there was more romantic fluff, can't lie. I like the scenes, but rn it feels a little imbalanced between the smut and the intimacy

“I’d said those words out loud.”
I WILL NEVER BE FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Typo should be “have to” not “half to”

Typo should be “blond”

Typo unnecessary question mark