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ew dirty mouth, ok, dirty word, ok, but dirty hole is SUCH a turnoff holy shit

I'm sorry the main villain dies in a single paragraph? no fight, nothing? lame

typo should be "too" not "to"

why is "God" capitalized this time but not others?

ok os how are we gonna close the book in about 50 pages like this?

typo should be "part" not "party"

No, you most definitely should have sent them away. It was just a coincidence that Callum took you then. But no, don't let this scary situation badger you into believing that you were in the wrong. Omfg please author don't do this

typo missing word

are you serious?