Status Updates From The Crystal Keepers

i can only stomach one chapter at a time

It’s tough and I’m only on page 10. The phrases used for imagery are slightly twisted. Some of them don’t quite fit. There needs to be more in-depth editing.
Dialogue seems stilted. I wanted to give this book a fair shake even though it’s clear the author has no regard for review spaces. I have a lot of notes already.

No character development, no relationship building. The characters say contradicting statements, PAGES a part. There was also a horrible fable thrown in about the big and little dipper of the main character's world... the fable made ZERO SENSE. There was also a new being introduced that was horrifyingly described as human like, but that was kept as a "pet" and that HAD to have a master...