Status Updates From A Valentine for Christmas (...

"Chandra's wavy sable-brown hair was pulled back in a low, loose chignon, framed by a beautiful halo headpiece Kayleigh created for her." (216) I am glad I looked up what a wedding halo headpiece was because, until then, I was picturing a Christmas pageant angel type of halo, which seemed...not right for a wedding?

"'Wait...you're serious?' Alonzo asked, finally. 'Sis, you're like the most responsible person I have ever known. No offense, Pops.'
'None taken,' her father said. Though, by the furrow of his brow, there clearly was." (178)

"'I'm willing to power through it, if you are,' he murmured between kisses to her throat. He could barely hold back a smirk as she sighed softly," (141) two smirks within two pages, I spoke too soon about the editing. Maybe this is just a regional usage I'm not familiar with? Or a regional meaning for smirk that doesn't mean...smirk?

"She'd hoped that knowing Dr.
Julian Brandon was too young for her would abate the deep attraction she felt for him. It hadn't. Now he wasn't Just kind and devastatingly handsome. He was a tempting, forbidden morsel she couldn't stop thinking about." (93) okay but that's because you forbade him to yourself, not because a 30 year old is a minor

Best edit of this book so far is the change between the inside front cover teaser and actual text from "smirk" to "smile"

This is a lot for the reader to discover during the last few chapters, should've been mentioned a little more before this

Girl, allow yourself to be happy and loved on! Damn! 😁