Status Updates From Arrival (The Kyron Invasion)

There's a section where the protagonist makes a plan and then when the plan is carried out, he criticizes it as if he didn't come up with it one his own. Baffling.

Another section where he is on the verge of unconsciousness due to blood loss from an injury that is being worked on by his wife, yet he is somehow able to describe everything that's happening. The story is told from his perspective...