Status Updates From Ancient Whispers

& whats up with Phoebus huh? Why is he all flirty with Lily knowing what he knows about her and Gabriel? Why play with fire??

Things have been hot and interesting. I cant believe.it when Keira (Lily's friend) said the name of Theuron, but I was expecting wierdly. Go figure. So when Lily saw him at the club after her nightmare and doubted her recognition especially with descriptions of bald head and tatto on left side of neck, knotted triangle, cant get more specific. Hel-lo 2 +2...lady!!just cause he was.in a suit and not a cloak! Really?!

Wow so far i am liking this story and to think I found this paperback For $1 @ The dollar tree...gonna make another trip to see what treasures I can find. places like this makes u actually hunt For buried treasure

Wow, amazingly hot so far and I am just starting. wow, wow! Its like those movies that right off that bat start off with all the action. I love that!

It ought to be a sin to have a story with this level of potential and not be a strong writer. It's just painful in some places. No humor where it should obviously be. Scenes are downright confusing when there are more than 3 characters interacting.

I don't have a good feeling about this one. Concept is good but it is not flowing well. The writing is a little too straight forward, like an English paper. I am still hopeful that it will come together.

I've been completely drawn into this world of magic and romance, destined soulmates and all. *Sigh*

I'm hooked! I would have read more last night if my lack of sleep hadn't caught up with me... ^_^