jD’s Reviews > Ancient Whispers > Status Update
jD
is 31% done
I don't have a good feeling about this one. Concept is good but it is not flowing well. The writing is a little too straight forward, like an English paper. I am still hopeful that it will come together.
— Dec 23, 2010 11:38AM
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jD
is 68% done
It ought to be a sin to have a story with this level of potential and not be a strong writer. It's just painful in some places. No humor where it should obviously be. Scenes are downright confusing when there are more than 3 characters interacting.
— Dec 23, 2010 09:19PM
