Status Updates From Raw: A Primeval Harem

Dialogue and writing is incredibly stiff. Just not written well and doesn’t flow very well, especially in dialogue as mentioned

I decided to just power through and skim the rest, because of how disinterested I am. Turns out it ends here, at 37% of the overall collection.
Boring as fuck. Not nearly enough of a hook for a compelling story. The actions Jak takes are stupid. The sex is boring. The relationships are too easy. What a dud of a book. I do not plan to ever continue this series. Maybe if I get truly bored, or forget how I hated this.

These are primitive cavemen, not even capable of metalworking. So the idea that they can understand concepts/use sentences like "activate the ability" or "turn off the ability" is utterly ridiculous.
The threesome scene they've been building to was awful. Give me pleasure, let me pleasure you while you pleasure her, pleasure pleasure pleasure. Terribly written and boring. This book sucks at everything.