Status Updates From Her Christmas Surprise
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Camille
is 19% done
WTF there’s like two paragraphs, where it sounds like the author couldn’t decide if she wanted the main character to be Liza or Eve. Because she changes up who was kidnapped. I haven’t even figured out which one is supposed to have been kidnapped at this point. Do these authors have zero proofreaders? Even a non-editor should catch some of these.
— Dec 26, 2022 01:22PM
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