Status Updates From The Sullivanians: Sex, Psyc...

Nevermind. I got people mixed up. Its Joan Harvey and Artie Honan. The paragraph is fine.

Page 175 contains a story about two men, Elliot & Artie, talking. "'She came up to me...'" Wait, "she"? Who's "she"? These are, according to the first two sentences, men talking.

"In other words, [Artie] Harvey, acting unilaterally, terminated his therapy with Pearce..." "His" therapy? So we are still talking about the same two men. The rest of the paragraph is only usng male pronouns.

Who was "she"?

"The parents who sent their children away were not bad people--in most cases they were intelligent, kind, and exceptionally well educated." Im sorry, but what? Since when are "intelligent" and "well educated" requirements for being a "good person"? Since when do "kind" people abandon their children so they can live a life of arrested development?

Page 89: "When I got married," Bray said years later, "I was a virgin, and we weren't even quite consummating. We were trying."

Page 91: "When I got married," Bray said years later, "I was a virgin, and we weren't even quite consummating. We were trying."

How did the editor miss this?

Joining a commune bent on revolutionizing society and or sexuality gies awry? Who could've guessed?

on the Upper West Side???