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Page 175 contains a story about two men, Elliot & Artie, talking. "'She came up to me...'" Wait, "she"? Who's "she"? These are, according to the first two sentences, men talking.
"In other words, [Artie] Harvey, acting unilaterally, terminated his therapy with Pearce..." "His" therapy? So we are still talking about the same two men. The rest of the paragraph is only usng male pronouns.
Who was "she"?
— 20 hours, 24 min ago
"In other words, [Artie] Harvey, acting unilaterally, terminated his therapy with Pearce..." "His" therapy? So we are still talking about the same two men. The rest of the paragraph is only usng male pronouns.
Who was "she"?
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Evan Deming
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Nevermind. I got people mixed up. Its Joan Harvey and Artie Honan. The paragraph is fine.
— 20 hours, 20 min ago
Evan Deming
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"The parents who sent their children away were not bad people--in most cases they were intelligent, kind, and exceptionally well educated." Im sorry, but what? Since when are "intelligent" and "well educated" requirements for being a "good person"? Since when do "kind" people abandon their children so they can live a life of arrested development?
— Sep 18, 2026 11:34AM
Evan Deming
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Page 89: "When I got married," Bray said years later, "I was a virgin, and we weren't even quite consummating. We were trying."
Page 91: "When I got married," Bray said years later, "I was a virgin, and we weren't even quite consummating. We were trying."
How did the editor miss this?
— Sep 11, 2026 06:26AM
Page 91: "When I got married," Bray said years later, "I was a virgin, and we weren't even quite consummating. We were trying."
How did the editor miss this?
Evan Deming
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Joining a commune bent on revolutionizing society and or sexuality gies awry? Who could've guessed?
— Aug 28, 2026 11:28AM