Status Updates From The Other Half (Lost And Fo...

I’ve been wanting to DNF for a long time now, but I wanted to get to the controversial part of the book. Oh wait, that’s the whole book. (Didn’t care initially, until I kept reading.) Anyway, it started off good until I quickly realized just how clingy the male mc is.

Was the author lazy when it came down to story-building? Genuine question.

I’m getting bored. Why is this book 363 pages long? So far it’s feeling like it should be 200-250 pages. I love a possessive, obsessed H but they have to have a certain charm for it to work for me. Nate is just a bossy asshole. The fact that he can so easily lie to Whitney is concerning. At least be honest about your crazy.

I read that this was insta-something, but I didn't expect it to happen at 3%. He already knew right then and there that she's it for him. So, what exactly will the rest of the book be about??? 😅