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The human queen using the lay out of her wards as one big magic spell is a great info drop… a cool idea even! But it took until the end chapter 44?!!!
So much filler! I still don’t understand the need to capture the Scorpion demon. They could’ve just killed it.

I am struggling to finish this. At this point… It’s a hate read

In book 1 the Quicksilver tells Saeris that as long as it holds the song she won’t forget what they remember.
But here we are in book 2 chapter 24 the Quicksilver takes a memory — she forgets it — and the scary book reading vamp-monster asks what will she do when the Quicksilver takes all her memories.
Feels like the rules needed to chang for the plot, instead of the plot working within the established rules

Chapter 22 Stargazer:
Another bad version of trying to be like SJM.
Oh, no, dream sex has me smelling like Fisher and look I have bite marks.

So, first Saeris is “reborn” like Feyre and now she’s having her version of mind bridge sex like Rhun and Lidia.

Well… book 1 is named the exact word Feyre uses to describe Amern’s eyes

Chapter 20 Huntsman:
In the midst of saving the brother and finding silver. We’ve gone on a side quest to capture a demon and make anti venom.
No brother saved yet, but let’s stop to describe a dream-cabin and her face getting licked by a dream-fox, before we get a chapter of dream-sex.

Can book 2 have even dumber plot twits than book 1?
Yes. Yes it can. WTF are we on a Scorpio-Spider venom side quest?
I’m so bored with this book and it’s only chapter 17

Ugh. When the narrator says thee but the word is actually the. It’s the worst!
The and thee are two different words with two different meanings. Thee means you!

“He needs to see you as a real person”
That’s so toxic!
Has the same energy as a guy who is only nice to women he finds attractive.
This isn’t a morally grey character, this is a description of a narcissist.

Damn, Callie, what happened to you?

Now I remember why I gave this book 3 stars. Guy with the stupid name isn’t likable. He isn’t a character who’s call Arrogant for plot points. Kingfisher is written with true arrogance. Like the author has trauma, but doesn’t even know it.
Why do people go crazy for this sleaze bag?

Say it with me. People who own swords DON’T put the tip on the ground.

Started my reread with the audiobook. I’m 4:04 in and Stella Bloom, the narrator has already given me the ick.
How can someone that gets paid to be a narrator not know that THE and THEE are two different words, with two different meanings?
And how can the producer NOT correct them?

This must be one of their first books. The writing is rough as hel.
I don’t understand publishers that rush to print. I dont understand how a publisher wouldn’t hire good editors.

Why does Ti have the same betrayal, how many years do you give him, conversation with Costa twice?
THE AUTHOR HAS LOST THE PLOT!

We’ve been told she’s sick to her stomach several times.
Conveniently, we’re told this after they Bristol says she’s on the pill. Then “ the pill” is bright up again.
So… I figured out she’s knocked up for awhile. The plot is so all over the place.
I’m so disappointed

Chapter 63 AND ANOTHER MISCOMMUNICATION BREAK UP! They broke up then got back together at the end of the last book. And now they’ve done it twice in this book.
Was this book rushed? Because I’ve been thoroughly disappointed.
Bristol can’t be alone!!! Why say it if she’s always going to be alone and get into trouble anyway?
There is no plot to this book.

SPOILERS

Chapter 14… and why the fuck didn’t Bristol tell her mom that Cormick seduced her into bed? That would’ve convinced her mom that she was being used by him for sure.
I hate the “smart” FMC is actually dumb

28 pages in and I’m already yelling at the editor for doing a shite job

I may have PTSD from how many times the word ‘had’ became a grammatical error.
For fuck sakes, use a grammar correcting program

My eyes are burning so bad. It’s 10PM, I was until 1:30 reading the last book, and I’ve been reading all day. But I still don’t want to put the book down

I got a couple of chapters in this morning. Let’s see what kind of damage I can get done at work!
I’m loving this series. And if it wasn’t inspiration for SJM, then the collective mind really is a wild thing!