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Chapter 35: Oven eyes?! Bahahahaha. Bahahahaha. Bahahaha bahahahaha bahahahaha bahahahhahaha

Chapter 34. So, we’ve dropped the lame nickname Rookie, for the new cringe of Lola.
Bahahahaha

Chapter 29. We’ve stepped into a 1930’s Noir detective movie. I half expected “the Butcher” to have Transatlantic accent.

Chapter 28: now we have some Harry Potter thrown in the mix

It’s like 2 people wrote this book.
The person that used all of SJM’s ideas and an editor that did their best to keep it from being straight up plagiarism

The author looks too young to use the word cripes. Wasn’t it popular to use in the 50’s?

Okay, seems we’ve moved past this being SJM fanfic of mixing CC and ACOTAR, and into it being its own story.
I felt the MMC offering to help a hot stranger was forced. As forced as the FMC accepting the help of a hot deadly stranger.
But, it is what it is, and I’m dialed in. Chapter 18

As soon as the actress read the MMC’s part in chapter 6, the worry that the actor would be reading the FMC parts in his chapters set it.
Here we are, Chapter 7, and I’m both cringing and laughing!!
Why? Why is this happening?! You’re paying two actors. Let me the female read female and the male read male.
*shakes head and chuckles

Chapter 6. Okay, so we’re done hinting that all the ideas for this book came from SJM. We’re just going ahead and announcing these are all stolen ideas.

Chapter two. Oh, goodie, money is pronounced like someone trying to be fancy.
Maybe I should read it instead of listening to, because this is annoying as fuck