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Chapter 15. I really don’t know where this story is going. I get wanting to bring supporting characters forward, but this feels too crowded. There’s too much mixed in. We’ve lost the plot. I’m bummed. I liked this arch, but it feels more like a loopty loo now.
I think she’s trying to do what SJM did with HOFAS, but with all the characters in the same room. It’s not working.
— Mar 21, 2026 09:30AM
I think she’s trying to do what SJM did with HOFAS, but with all the characters in the same room. It’s not working.
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Chapter 23 and I’m thinking about DNFing. I can’t get behind making Regan, the female protagonist, someone to root for.
Is what’s happening to her bad? Yes. Did she make a human rip out her own throat? Yes, yes she did. She bullied the FMC and has made bad choices all for power. So, no. I can’t see her redemption
— Mar 23, 2026 02:42PM
Is what’s happening to her bad? Yes. Did she make a human rip out her own throat? Yes, yes she did. She bullied the FMC and has made bad choices all for power. So, no. I can’t see her redemption