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When did she stop working at the general store? Wasn’t she supposed to be doing both?

Missing details here and there. When did she stop taking suppressants, and why? They added her to the pack chat—is there another that she’s not in? Etc.

I’m so confused. Wtf is the Alpha’s Alpha. I’m reading the ebook and we just be missing several pages at least if not a whole chapter because they’re all talking about it like we should know what it is, what the mission is, what their plan is…I’ve got nothing. I went back to make sure I didn’t miss anything, and I searched for it in the book. I’ve got nothing. Why are they going. Where are they going

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Already having deja vu, because the start to this is painfully similar to “Broke Down” by Sharan Daire 🤦🏽‍♀️😂 single, destitute mom driving along the middle of nowhere when her car breaks down? Oh no! Whatever shall she do?! Too bad there isn’t a handsome available man to swoop in and save the day! Oh, wait….

Not finished yet but so far getting very Harry Potter vibes. This girl doesn’t know she has magic until she gets a letter from a school of magic inviting her to come (and the uniform includes a cloak!) and while there we learn that an evil mage may have escaped prison (prisoner of Azkaban, anyone?). 😂

Honestly these are just getting worse and worse in terms of the writing. I’m really disappointed as I loved the YA Crave series (same author, different pen name). I think it comes down to poor/lazy editing tbh. If readers are noticing inconsistencies that don’t make sense, they should have been caught by the editor. Stg I just read the line “hurt or injured” ... that’s .... the same thing?