Finally getting interesting! I've only kept reading because I'm stubborn. It's bee. a retelling of teen angst - very mundane, swim meet, classes, formal dance, workouts. Even the mer land has been boring. Then at the 59% mark, Ashlyn got hurt and Fin saved her. And now both are drowning in their cover ups and lies. At last, so meat to this story!
— Jul 19, 2013 01:31PM
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