DNF 15%
I'm sad. This had so much potential, between the characters and the world-building.
It was a good beginning and, suddenly, at 11% everything turned... weird? I don't know. I didn’t like how the sex scenes were written between the MMCs, and the FMC behavior felt weird.
A review said that this story needs to be rewritten by someone who can fix all its flaws, and I couldn’t agree more.
— Apr 14, 2026 03:04PM
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