Oka observations so I don’t forget while writing a review
I think l have finally discovered what irks me with the writing. To put it simply, imagine you’re watching what she’s describing as a movie, right. It’s very plasticky. I love the premises but the scenes used to illustrate the emotions and events are quite cliche. Not that it’s bad, just one aspect she can improve on but its better than the other two
— Feb 10, 2026 02:07AM
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