Rushing through this to finish it as quickly as possible. Underdeveloped characters, repetitive descriptions (please stop talking about her golden twists of hair and how her face colours with embarrassment/shame/anger), yawnsome plot. I enjoyed The Foundling, I expect by then the author may have found her footing more but this one feels very much like a shaky debut.
— Jul 15, 2024 09:32AM
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