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It really doesn’t make sense that Gigi just wanted to marry Marcus because she doesn’t want to be alone. Let’s add some spice to the story and say she had a secret crush on the guy or something.

I thought Gigi was older than Marcus. It’s not being portrayed that way on the book. I don’t care if it’s to showcase the whole kink situation. If it’s reverse age gap, let it show and be known.

There was no real build up to their relationship. Can’t say I feel anything for the characters.

I feel no chemistry whatsoever between the characters. I will keep reading though because I don’t want to DNF

How do you work in crime and your house can be so easily broken into? And OK, it can be happen but why is Gio turning back just because Catalina said it? Because it’s not only dangerous but reckless. This book makes me want to throw the towel. -_-

Faking a death in the mafia is close to impossible. Well, in the real mafia at least, this books plot twists are unbelievable.

How, after betrayed, you still trust a man? Letting lust over cloud your judgment. This is beyond me.

Agreeing so easily to anything a man say after they lie and deceive you is so dick-whipped coded :(

Oh no! Why would you want to be with your cousins ex? Even if dead, the fact’s still there

For once in a book, I want the women to be the badasses one or for the men to be the one going crazy about the females. Getting all and I quote ““I don’t mind.” He sets his hand on my lower back and I feel tingles everywhere.”

You’ve all but met this guy for 5 mins and being in his presence makes you feel at ease. Please.

Also, getting into bed with the guy you feel a shady vibe off, hummm

In the other Mafia books I’ve read, it’s impossible to just live off far away from family because you don’t want to belong in that life. It’s just not believable because your family is dangerous, you can’t just be without protection. Anyone with resources will know you even if using your mothers maiden name.

The age gap is bothering me so much I don’t want to continue reading. It’s a 17 year difference 😭

This book has too many deadpan jokes and dry humor, makes it super cringe

So far so good but why is she giving information so easily after being caught and why has it been so easy for Ryan to find information about her or herself, it’s very unbelievable

“Speaking of bulges, was that a churro in your pocket last Friday night, or were you just happy to see me?”

maam please embarrassing

“He’ll never know it’s me, Mama. I’ll get close to him, find out what I need to know, and then ruin him. In and out. Quick and deadly.”

This phrase alone made me want to stop reading

not 9 years to be together… either be or dont be

80% on the book and I can say the author needs to work on differentiating timelines for the understanding of the readers. I read three times a “Three years earlier…” and I was so beyond confused. The book is all over the place. Good storyline but bad execution. I liked the begging and the end of the book, where things make more sense. I’ll finish the book because Im curious.

why is nobody talking about the disgusting teacher getting involved with minors and how everyone keeps quiet? my god and the way all men in these book treat women is horrible and why is the FMC is so idk like she’s not a child everyone both treats like one and she does act like that too

DNF 83%, I’ve made it far enough…

The book needs to be edited and instead of 500 pages it would be like 200 pages. No need to repeat the same thing over and over just to meet your word goal. Literally the same phrase from one paragraph to another. There was no dialogues because what one character said got repeated by the other.

DNF 30% or so, started this book, then stopped reading and I’ve finished two others already and I just cant get in on this one😣🫤

okay… umm

gotta dnf this one

i don’t want to DNF this book at 41% but goddamn is hard to read. It needs loads of editing and characters are very weird starting with Frank who is 31 but acts like a freaking teenager instead of minding his own business. Melissa is unbearable and knows no boundaries. FMC never knows how to make a decision or speak up!

“When we didn’t let our inner beasts come out to play, we all got a little antsy and irritable”

Why is this book so repetitive and boring? Basically every male POV is saying this while the female POV just has no personality and is ready and willing to take whatever shit they throw at her, I guess this is another DNF 😐

DNF. You could say Zeus is a pedo 😕

DNF