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This book makes no sense. Freya has no personality and she’s literally all over the place. Also, what the hell people push her towards Alex for? I understand small towns but the gossip to a stranger? If she’s really running from her abusive ex-husband, she’s too trustworthy and too okay with being left with Alex.

Getting a POV from the nurse is surreal 😂

The author wrote Thiago’s name as Thiego once.

Also , fucking with vaseline as a lubricant? Is that safe? I mean there was one scene where he pushed his cinnamon candy inside her! Yikes

Make up your mind about your feelings Tess.

What’s up with the butchered Spanish? Ugh. Saying “y quién es este?” instead of “esta” and the question is also disrespectful

When they were talking on the phone, he said she said something and blushed, I was just like how do you know!

I can’t finish it. She’s talking about falling in love after 4 days

I needed more chemistry between the characters because they just love each other out of nowhere. I mean I understand Lyla since she’s the stalker but Lukyan just fell for her too fast

I thought Lukyan and Illayana were in New York and after the attack the arrive perfectly on time to La Vegas, way too surreal 😂

Some things here and there not really thought over by the author. Because if Alek was 6’7 and Drea 5’1 or close, how can he rest his forehead against hers? Unless he literally crouches

Also, them fighting a group of people with different weapons on basically hand to hand combat, and they were outnumbered but still managed to kill everyone!

Taking the super dirty underwear is definitely not it, after her not taking a shower for god knows how long, the stench! 😭

Im pretty sure she stinks so why do you think grabbing her is a good idea

This book is giving me whiplash 😥

“Wait for what? Don’t tell me you’re shy now. Does that mean you care about me, Bun?” His lip turns up and I shake my head.

“And you’re certain she can be trusted?” I ask, hating that I am, but I don’t trust her completely. Not like I did Abrahm. And this obsession I have with her doesn’t make me any wiser.

This is why I hate enemies to lovers because why are you having sex and saying this and that to turn around once the heat wears off

Girl stand up

I’ve missed him calling me that so fucking much.

wdym you missed him calling you by the nickname you hate pls

“You keep yelling and making people look at us and I’ll really give you something to scream about, Bun.” He pulls away and winks at me with a fake-ass smile. His white teeth flash and make my core heat. “Now, behave.” I breathe in sharply as his cold hands curl around my sides and lift me up onto the board.

You were supposed to be a badass Nell. This book is probing to be the exact opposite

“How about you wash yourself off of me, Bunny? I only like your blood when it’s fresh.” Bradshaw unzips his pants and frees his dick.

Disgusting, why

Is this how he stares at me when I’m not looking? There’s so much pain there. More than any person should have to carry. I know that weight.

Girl stop, you are not a psychologist. Be the strong badass you should be

“Damn. Rejected again,” he mumbles and raises a brow. “Want company?” I break. “Sure.”

Why are women portrayed so weak in books? She was supposed to be a badass 😭

“Actually,” I say, grinning, “it was a whole weekend of debauchery. And I may have gotten three boyfriends out of it. Rhett dropped me off.”

I feel like they acting as if it’s normal it’s unreal. I’d expect a bit of judgment or pushback.

Stand your ground

We need a strong female lead who won’t be putty by just a look of the male lead! Authors, specially female authors, do better!

This book cannot be read as a standalone because it’s way interconnected with the previous stories and it involves too many characters. This story, at least at the begging is not focused on the main characters.

It feels like Kinsey is being difficult for fun. She’s so unreasonable

It’s not Juniors place to tell you things. Just like you keep things to yourself and be doing things to him out of spite, he can decide wether or not to tell you things.

This book has just open door sex at best. Kinsey is complicating things beyond extreme and the way she acts feels forced. This book feels like it’s all over the place

Have some shame Dhalia. Stand your ground and stand up for yourself, just a little bit.

Hate to break it to you sweetheart but as part of the mafia, you will always look over your shoulder for blood. That life is about that

Zara’s wilderness and strength is not that portrayed on the book or I need them to be pointed out to me. I understand she ran away but apart from that, what else? I would have loved to see her being more of a badass, instead we’re left assuming with our imagination

I personally would prefer if there was just a tiny bit of unsureness before they both dived into it. The obsession from Enzo didnt feel like one because we didnt feel the two years he spent pinning over Zara, if you know what
I mean.