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So far, this is fun and quirky. I’m enjoying it. It’s giving me parasol protectorate vibes.

This is fun. I love the dialogue especially

Lots of tell, not show, but I sometimes like that in a who dunnit.

And we’re in it!

Mrs. Judith Potts […] had a job she loved that took up just enough of her time and no more, and best of all, she didn’t have to share her life with any man.

Cute and cosy so far!

I really wish you’d start now, thx.

“What do you think?” he shouts with an arm raised. “Should we start now? Or give them another moment to contemplate how absolutely fucked they are?”

Omg. Not another trial. Who edited this book?

‘You had me monologuing!!!’ 😂

“I’ve spent many years learning how I might break the tether that keeps me bound here, and this is the key. …That’s how I managed to contact the perfect, gullible little pawn to aid in my schemes. The fact that he has absolutely no conscience ensured my plans went off without a hitch.”

lol sometimes I just can’t

He tells me he loves me, and I do the same, and then we come together in a burst of heat and slick, wet desire, my soul reborn from the earth and molded back together.

Now we’re cooking with gas

I feel like the plot has finally started to move… it’s about time at 34%

Thanks for sharing

One thing I learned from my father is how to tie a knot that becomes tighter with pressure. It’s a random memory that surfaced at the most useful time possible. I ignore the tears that blur my eyes because this is a stupid thing to cry over and I really don’t have time right now.

Oh dear god.

“Aha!” I cry out when I open a closet full of linens. It’s not a great plan, but it’s not the worst. I heave the lot out and dump them on the ground.

Not what I was expecting… pushing through this one.

After ripping through the first 3 books, I’ve stagnated. I will persist.