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VIKTOR NOOOOOOO

NOT ELIZABETH-

The whole narrative of this book would fall apart if Viktors monster was beautiful. Viktor wouldn't have been fearful of it, the monster would've found a place among humans and received the love he gave, and everyone wouldve been happy. I also don't understand why Viktor didnt just get himself a gun, just wallowing in self pity for no damn reason. I understand the cultural and social impact of this book though.

this is straight switzerland propaganda. im tired of viktor ugh

This book has a nice enemies to lovers couple, but I personally don't like how quickly the romance started, I would've really loved if it was slower, maybe more confusion and hesitation on the part of Jude. Because she seems to just not be affected n recall all the harrassment and assault that Carden did and allowed to happen. I would've liked it if she came to know him better and then maybe forgive him after a while

i’ve noticed many cuts in action, i don’t know what to call it. many times i notice that a character sitting or standing is not mentioned and i feel like the author played it in their head but maybe rushed to write it and forgot? maybe it’s purposeful i don’t know

it’s fun, a little childish behavior for what i believe are 17 year old kids, but it’s fun.

p. 72, so far the pacing is a little fast, i would've liked it to be more in depth on some parts.