16 pages. The prologue. Early thoughts, has its basic funny moments though I think the author is trying too hard to be funny at times, hoping that doesn’t carry on
FMC is around 22/23 which is young but when she says “Your Evilness” I cringe a bit. Then she said “I can’t do that. You’re…you’re…bad” I was like ermm of all the adjectives?!? And it made her sound like 6 yrs old
Still hopeful tho!
— May 06, 2026 05:04AM
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