I’m actually hating this. Terrible on-the-nose writing with zero subtlety and too much repetition already. Two gratuitous and boring sex scenes within the first 20 pages, which tells me the relationships are all sex and zero real chemistry, so they have to keep explaining to the audience how much they’re crazy about each other, otherwise you wouldn’t (and still don’t) believe there’s any substance.
— Mar 17, 2026 09:17AM
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