some notes: 
• never in my life have i ever felt so beat over the head with purple prose. the author’s verbosity meanders so far in every direction. i am not the first to say this. maybe a thematic device for being lost in the woods, but it seems more indulgent than intentional.
• oh another character? oh another character, oh another cha-? oh another character? hope they arent import- oh another character? oh-
    
    
      — Aug 17, 2025 05:35PM
    
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