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Still waiting for the big reveal; there are hints on what happened but not the proper presentation.

Enjoying the writing so far; the distinctive style with what’s supposedly run-on

For river songs by Steve, so far it has multiple sentences with what normally characterize as run on, with tons of phrases back into a sentence. But it works so well. Similar to the pacing of Night Bitch, the wording packs a punch in driving the pace of the story.

I used to write in run-on sentences when I was in primary school in Singapore for my Chinese composition. My Chinese teacher will criticize me for a writing run on sentences. Sentence is full of commas with phrases. That memory have always stayed with me because I still honestly feel like I’ve not done something wrong.

Pretty easy read

Solid book with neat background on world events. Everything happens for a reason even if they may appear to be random.

Vulnerability loop; putting others before you, collectively

The back story are starting to come to light on a layer of description and history about the Dutch house and its residents — past and present.

It’s starting to progress slowly with some interesting new information such as the kidnapping of Komatsu

It’s starting to be exciting

giversome game; interesting dynamic between power and vulnerability and how they affect cooperation.

Stories starting to converge. It’s a drawn out affair, details are meticulously laid out so as to give it room to breathe, without feeling rushed. The two lines, seemingly parallel are slowly drawing closer, like 2 lines on a curvature that eventually meet.

Loved learning about Allen curve