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Deadass not to sound problematic as fuck but I hate these Woman Books bro

not sure why I'm reading this I'm tired of these books

Rose and Charlie, one and the same ---

“Brute force of his appetite had to confront eventually the fact of her living body.” My god - wrestling with how much I like or don’t like this style of writing - but what a sentence. Like long pages of poetry cloaking themselves. And infectious, in a way, very easy to slip into - lends itself well to portraying consciousness/stream of thought unmodified (although it is evident that the phrases are wrought w care)

Really disliking this “universe ejaculating spirit” thing. Obviously evocative and probably meant to elicit exactly what it is eliciting but I hate it! More and more I see this sort of provocatively gross phrasing and I’m tired of it it feels purposeless. Also there’s a strange repetition of phrases over the span of probably two pages or so that I find very annoying especially in audio form

This is not good

And then my loan ran out so another 4 weeeks it is

I really can't do this writing style

this is going doqn so easy but i really dont know what to make of it

Oh Santiago’s chapter is so True. What a breath

Zoe is so 19. And I say this positively. It's really interesting to see how well delineated the age-maturity aspects of all characterizations are

You know, weirdly, all I can think about is how many people I know exactly like this. The cocaine and the surface-level taste and the questionably-sourced stimulants and so much in service of the image [as in - not that the characters are themselves explicitly focused on image, but rather that the narration is]; and the music and partying and wealth and the art most of all. I hate them. Is that terrible to say?