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sylvester is 3% done
I really can't do this writing style
Dec 06, 2024 03:29PM
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sylvester is 32% done
“Brute force of his appetite had to confront eventually the fact of her living body.” My god - wrestling with how much I like or don’t like this style of writing - but what a sentence. Like long pages of poetry cloaking themselves. And infectious, in a way, very easy to slip into - lends itself well to portraying consciousness/stream of thought unmodified (although it is evident that the phrases are wrought w care)
Jan 02, 2026 02:34AM
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