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Easy read, I like how I'm put in a perpetually uncomfortable position : I keep developing sympathy for her, and then she'll remind me who she really is and I immediately regret feeling like that
The pace is very comfortable to follow
I think readers who enjoyed Nightbitch would like it

Oh she's UNBEARABLE! She's very believably written, and she's obviously supposed to be insufferable, but it's hard to hang on 🥲

Ohlololo, ça me fatigue déjà
C'est Amélie Poulain core en encore plus raciste 💀

The evolution in Kitay and Rin's relationship really came out of no-where

The pace isn't very helpful to the story, sadly, it's especially not helping the atmosphere, which I find cruelly lacking...

So far, it's not especially thrilling. It's actually rather slow and mundain, not at all what I was expecting. It's not gripping but when I finally pick it up, I enjoy my time with jt

reads fast, but very ya

Le vaisseau qui disparut - 4/5
Celle-ci était au contraire un brin trop courte!

Le vaisseau qui tuait - 4/5
Mission Théâtrale - 3,5/5 Un peu long, le rythme n'était pas aussi bon que dans les autres histoires

Le Vaisseau en Deuil - 4,25/5
Bon équilibre suite/renouvellement
"Il me fallait des larmes" crying again

Le Vaisseau qui Chantait - 5/5+
Les FRI-SSONS! (et les larmes). C'était incroyable, l'écriture est simple mais sa précision fait mouche à chaque phrase ; beaucoup de nuance et de subtilité. Incroyable

Such a gem, I love how poetry takes so many shapes, it's so clever

Astonishing tension in that last scene
I admire the paradox in the emotions I feel for little Leonora

Le début était presque effrayant, inquiétante étrangeté
Maintenant c'est plus classique

The Rules - 4/5
The ending is a bit puzzling? But the next story might be the second part of this actually

Speedo - 4,75/5

"[...] the only father I'd ever known hugged me long and tight. I cried again because no one had held me in a long time, and because I didn't know when someone might hold me again"
Eh, elle est dure celle-là hein

Speedo
Dual narrative works really well. Super emotional when Guy phones his mom

Keepsake - 4-/5
Much shorter than the other, so a tad less immersive. I still like both story and writing! It was a bit mysterious, a nice variation to the other two stories

Small Castles - 4,75/5
Such believable characters. They really frustrated me the whole time, and I came out relieved but so angry