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It’s not getting better. Why are we spending so much time telling us what April is eating. The best friend’s brother realizing she’s overwhelmed in an overcrowded bar and walks her home catching her when she slips, really? Also why is there so much info on how tall everyone else is… do we have to follow the small and weak stereotype. Honest question has the author ever heard of showing instead of telling.

Ma’am! The exclamation point are unnecessary! Also this is not an academic article why are we adding footnotes. Also was this edited or just pulled straight off Wattpad. The throwing her hair in a bun! The heart condition! The best friend’s older brother! The studying at university for a law degree at 18 after a gap year!