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Some continuity errors and the characters are a little flat - started off really promising

The first two pages read like every “how to spot ai” sample I’ve ever seen

Why are the names Rogan and Elon 🤮

DNF very weird phrasing. Idiot FMC. You are family with these people and you don’t know their names?

This book is awful. The writing is beyond juvenile. If you told me an 11 year old wrote it, I would believe you. The premise is semi interesting but completely ruined by the terrible writing.

I quit. I am so bored. I don’t relate to either main character. The writing style is not for me, plus it felt like it switched up randomly from formal and trying to sound poetic to modern casual with no explanation.

None of her behavior or thoughts appear to be grounded in logic

So fucking repetitive and hard to read

DNF 3 pages in. Repetitive, rambling, reminds me of someone on coke lol.

We are in February and literally nothing has happened since the very beginning

People just be slipping and falling on eachothers lips 🙄

Timelines keep getting changed. Makeup shaming. Keep skipping first words of sentences like that.

DNF. Fmc is so fucking obnoxious I don’t care if there’s redemption I can’t read one more second

Not quitting but it’s def a mood read I’m not in the m👀d for

It feels like it’s a summary of a book so far? Like there’s no depth and it’s just this happened then this then this then this.