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funnily enough, i know about the five whys mostly from ux design/research. never thought about applying it to my own life til now though

how is it that mc (who wants to KILL GOD) is less interesting than kira and zara. by god i wish they were the mcs

couple problems:
aris is completely forgettable. i honestly forgot her name until she was thinking something to herself. which is disappointing considering she LITERALLY wants to kill god. like hello??? can we expand on that?
what’s the point of the culling if most people are just gonna die on starside anyway. for a death game to work give me a good reason why it exists
harlan raker is a really stupid name

so far has a very voicey first person + passive mc quirk that i have disliked since time immemorial. a little too much telling. after listening for what felt like forever i was like, sure, some world details are interesting, but can the mc be like. an active agent and DO something

i’m too asexual for some of this stuff but they ARE cute

what in the armpit fetish

sometimes it’s hard to believe leo is a 29 year old man. he acts like a schoolgirl with a crush and it’s so funny

it’s probably, again, because i’m reading this as an audiobook, but leo is giving awkward anime protagonist. he’s such a loser LMAO

maybe it’s bc i’m reading this as an audiobook, but i’m really taken aback by the narration. maybe it’s just because i haven’t heard third person present in ages, but something about the prose feels very telly and distant from leo. it’s like im listening to a documentary about him

i do love me some messed up sapphics but i need a little more progression to believe in this

why is he so horny right out the gate

i thought this was gonna be about tennis not say gex

what do you MEAN you don’t know what this book is about

this is so weird i love it