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If Lumi dies I'm burning this book and taking everything with me

i'm sorry I cannot take this book seriously it's so bad it's not even endearing

omg he solved a rubiks cube he's so smart he's so special should we call the press? should we call my third grade classroom?

ooooooooh

trying so hard not to be a hater but that's the worst song i've seen written in a book in a hot minute. "catchy as hell"? you misspelled bad

I was like. 85% right and honestly this has gotten better from the beginning

I fear the dialogue is not doing it for me i cannot take anything seriously

writing out my "guessing the plot twist" ticket right now

<spoiler> I'm pretty sure Caleb's bathroom friend is going to end up being the Bayani </spoiler>

dude you are dying soon why are we talking about batman

I get why authors try to put more modern sounding text in dialogue but I think it sometimes gets to a point

you know sometimes I wish characters were less direct in saying exactly what's going on. like i don't need to be told something is potentially traumatic, let it just be that without spelling it out

me 🤝 gabe
being mildly allergic to apples

Oh this is so good I am in hook line and sinker

I too Briar would be asking obnoxious questions about the role of magic in this world, you are so real for that

I wish Amelia's father was given more depth so the whole "I didn't expect to lose an heir, I've always expected to lose Amelia" hit harder. Like. The preemptory grief could be so interesting instead everyone surrounding Amelia is practically a caricature

Langston Hughes poem in the epigraph, I'm already sold

Lowkey these documents are kind of creepy, tonal shift but I do like it

This is good so far, but things are feeling very simplistic for lack of a better word. The plot and characters lack a bit of depth

oh no. oh no. your girl is stressed

"did you love him" "I knew him" goddddd

hard to remember these characters are meant to be 27 not 17 :/

Walt really possessed Hollis and immediately went "Damn bitch, you live like this?"

I love the vibe that something is afoot moreso than Avalon knows and everyone else is telling us but you've got no clue what

I don't know if I'm gonna make it out of this one y'all

I am sat and seated

The short scenes are a really interesting way to snapshot it I really like it

I love how itself this book is