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I was like. 85% right and honestly this has gotten better from the beginning

I fear the dialogue is not doing it for me i cannot take anything seriously

dude you are dying soon why are we talking about batman

I get why authors try to put more modern sounding text in dialogue but I think it sometimes gets to a point

you know sometimes I wish characters were less direct in saying exactly what's going on. like i don't need to be told something is potentially traumatic, let it just be that without spelling it out