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This is good so far, but things are feeling very simplistic for lack of a better word. The plot and characters lack a bit of depth

— Mar 15, 2026 07:53PM

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b is 41% done

I wish Amelia's father was given more depth so the whole "I didn't expect to lose an heir, I've always expected to lose Amelia" hit harder. Like. The preemptory grief could be so interesting instead everyone surrounding Amelia is practically a caricature

— Mar 19, 2026 07:45AM

b is 25% done

— Mar 15, 2026 07:53PM