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"Still on the floor, Ryouji nimbly reached below the hem of his shorts and scratch his bare calf with a thumb."

Should be "scratched".

"Apparently, there were a handful of clients like the one he'd battled with that afternoon, though it seemed that one was particularly infamous at the office. It seemed like the client was somewhat infamous at the office."

Two versions of this sentence probably got left in, which is likely why it almost repeats exactly.

There's a backward quotation mark.

"...asked Fran"

No period at the end of the sentence.

"Myne" is spelled "Mine".

"...causing was simply because Benno had mercifully forgiven then."

I think that is supposed to be "them".

"Before long, a younger boy who couldn’t be more than twenty, his bright orange hair tied behind his head."

This sentence is unfinished.

"...but I forget we were in the temple."

Should be 'forgot'.

"He looked over shoulder curiously,"

I'm sure this should be "my shoulder".

"tastes" was replaced with "your choice of teegabt" in the ebook. Besides a typo early on, it's the first difference I've run into.

Summary of Part 1: "myserious" instead of "mysterious" in the print version.

Fixed in the ebook.

"brother-in law"

Forgot a hyphen.

"My body heated up as if all the blood inside me was boiling,"- print

"My body heated up as if all the blood in my body was boiling,"- e-book

At times I feel like the copy of the e-book from the library is the older version of the book and the print copy has more corrections. Things like using the word "body" twice in the same sentence are clunky, and the print version here feels like the 'fixed up' version.

Again, an error only in the e-book:
"The temple was ready for us and as soon as we reached the gate, and a gray priest..."

An extra 'and' in there.

In the e-book, "I clenched my first". It's correct in print.

"What good am I for..."

I feel like this is a mangled "What am I good for" or "What good am I if".

"...so the master had not met a child he needed to take of so dearly himself before now."

This confuses me so. I'm sure I know what they meant to say, but it feels like remnants of an old sentence got left behind in the editing process.

"...instantly I could feel body tilt."

Should be "my body". This error seems to be in print and e-book.

Switches between "gray" and "grey".

"Mark rose a hand" in the e-book.

"Mark raised a hand" in the print.

There were tons of changes between the e-book and print, so I stopped listing them for now.

But, the print version has, "Not like Lutz's, he's all cheeky and mean now."

This is corrected in the e-book.

"then started to explain." - print

"and opened my mouth." - e-book

The print write's Tuuli's name while the e-book says "she".

Seems like there may be various formatting changes and such in this part, too. There might be a lot of little changes between versions in this chapter.

"It really did rain today." - Print.

"It was really raining." - e-book

"Towards" in the e-book.
"Toward" in the print.

"Eeer" in the print is "Errr" in the e-book.

At 31%, it says "Luz" in the e-book instead of Lutz. It's correct in the print version.

"Gilberta company"

Company isn't capitalized.

"The dim light sneaking its way into our roomed hinted..."

'Room' got an extra 'ed' somehow.