Eisah Eisah’s Reviews > Ascendance of a Bookworm (Light Novel), Part 1 Volume 3 > Status Update
Eisah Eisah
is on page 282 of 357
"...so the master had not met a child he needed to take of so dearly himself before now."
This confuses me so. I'm sure I know what they meant to say, but it feels like remnants of an old sentence got left behind in the editing process.
— Nov 01, 2022 08:49PM
This confuses me so. I'm sure I know what they meant to say, but it feels like remnants of an old sentence got left behind in the editing process.
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Eisah Eisah
is on page 306 of 357
"My body heated up as if all the blood inside me was boiling,"- print
"My body heated up as if all the blood in my body was boiling,"- e-book
At times I feel like the copy of the e-book from the library is the older version of the book and the print copy has more corrections. Things like using the word "body" twice in the same sentence are clunky, and the print version here feels like the 'fixed up' version.
— Nov 02, 2022 09:30AM
"My body heated up as if all the blood in my body was boiling,"- e-book
At times I feel like the copy of the e-book from the library is the older version of the book and the print copy has more corrections. Things like using the word "body" twice in the same sentence are clunky, and the print version here feels like the 'fixed up' version.
Eisah Eisah
is on page 303 of 357
Again, an error only in the e-book:
"The temple was ready for us and as soon as we reached the gate, and a gray priest..."
An extra 'and' in there.
— Nov 02, 2022 09:13AM
"The temple was ready for us and as soon as we reached the gate, and a gray priest..."
An extra 'and' in there.
Eisah Eisah
is on page 302 of 357
In the e-book, "I clenched my first". It's correct in print.
— Nov 02, 2022 09:09AM
Eisah Eisah
is on page 302 of 357
"What good am I for..."
I feel like this is a mangled "What am I good for" or "What good am I if".
— Nov 02, 2022 09:05AM
I feel like this is a mangled "What am I good for" or "What good am I if".
Eisah Eisah
is on page 253 of 357
"...instantly I could feel body tilt."
Should be "my body". This error seems to be in print and e-book.
— Oct 30, 2022 01:37PM
Should be "my body". This error seems to be in print and e-book.
Eisah Eisah
is on page 224 of 357
"Mark rose a hand" in the e-book.
"Mark raised a hand" in the print.
— Oct 28, 2022 08:10PM
"Mark raised a hand" in the print.
Eisah Eisah
is on page 221 of 357
There were tons of changes between the e-book and print, so I stopped listing them for now.
But, the print version has, "Not like Lutz's, he's all cheeky and mean now."
This is corrected in the e-book.
— Oct 28, 2022 07:49PM
But, the print version has, "Not like Lutz's, he's all cheeky and mean now."
This is corrected in the e-book.
Eisah Eisah
is on page 201 of 357
"then started to explain." - print
"and opened my mouth." - e-book
— Oct 28, 2022 01:10PM
"and opened my mouth." - e-book
